I thought it was for comedic purposes.
When her breath smells of skittle, her saliva tastes
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you summarised it well, thank you soph
it stopped being funny when nobody else thought so, please don't have me banned
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Xalimos back home come with their own set of trials and tribulations. I'd rather marry a xalimo in the diaspora at least then we can argue in just one language.
@Sophisticate if you don't mind me asking, how did you get so good at writing? Do you write for work/school so on a day-to-day basis? How often do you read? how many books have you read? and what kind of books do you read?
Those are a lot of questions. I think I'm caadi as a writer. I've just been in school longer than most and I enjoy reading (mostly non-fiction) from various genres.
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You're not wrong about that. Your writing is slightly above average.
Thanks.
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could you rate mine
I would not want to make an imprecise evaluation due to the lack of information and writing samples. Therefore, an assessment would be premature. When writing, you must keep your audience in mind and avoid lulling them to sleep or drowning them in pretense through your verbosity. In other words, refrain from using ten-dollar words too often. Never assume your audience has prior knowledge about a particular topic; even if they are experts in the field, certain technical terms may not be transferable across sub-disciplines. As for creative writing that is a different kettle of fish.could you rate mine
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38 | Hyderabad, India
Is daji yariisey, I haven't sent you the story yet. All I wanted was a yes or no.
No comment.
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38 | Hyderabad, India
What manner of qooq could induce someone to write such indecency this is not dissimilar to scat play, this is a tier only for the initiated @hamar_oo_iidil maxaad soo martay 
It's not weird. We simply aren't the same. I don't like providing an assessment with limited information. I need a lot of source material before I make any claims. So you get no answer. Have a nice day!
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I told you I'm going to send it huuno don't worry I'll tag you in the thread when the time comes, hopefully by tomorrow.It's not weird. We simply aren't the same. I don't like providing an assessment with limited information. I need a lot of source material before I make any claims. So you get no answer. Have a nice day!
Right now I was just seeking an answer if you were interested in evaluating my work instead of me asking you out of the blue after I had posted it.
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He was serious...Old mate should have said 'it's just a prank, bro'
Youβre like me. I loath reading fiction. Most of the fiction books at my school library were about sci-fi, detectives investigating murders and mediocre teenage love stories. I would rather read JFKβs autobiography
