The feeling of emptiness (a poem)

[Emily]

@Knowles do Somalians lack sympathy and compassion instead of comforting you they want you dead

They take your criticism to the heart

 

[Kudhufo Kadhaqaq]

@Knowles do Somalians lack sympathy and compassion instead of comforting you they want you dead

They take your criticism to the heart

I offered her a hug

 

[Emily]

I offered her a hug

That is sweet of you

 

[Jake from State Farm]

@Knowles do Somalians lack sympathy and compassion instead of comforting you they want you dead

They take your criticism to the heart

She is probably the most hated on here. These niggas sensitive.

 

[government]

I don't understand @Knowles was this an assignment for your class

 

[Gibiin-Udug]

Pray 2 rakahs and read ayaatul Kursi. Read 5 fatihas. You will be alright.

Go for a walk, read a book and listen to a podcast.

 

[Muji]

I knew there's a broken soul behind this conniving and hateful character.
It's still not an excuse to bring out all of your sob stories of lost loves. Don't cry on my shoulder please.

I need the support of everyone.

A broken heart can kill.

 

[Muji]

Pray 2 rakahs and read ayaatul Kursi. Read 5 fatihas. You will be alright.

Go for a walk, read a book and listen to a podcast.

I will try this today.

It went from bad to worse and now I need to recover before it’s too late.

 

[Muji]

I don't understand @Knowles was this an assignment for your class

Walal this is from the school of life

They don’t teach you this in school

But was it really that good?

 

[Gooney112]

Is knowles male or female? Says male but people keep saying abaayo....wtf

 

[Muji]

tell me he was my geeljire brother before i say my piece.

Only a Somaale Male can cause so much devastation

I may not love again

 

[Karim]

I need the support of everyone.

A broken heart can kill.

Hurting you is the last thing on my mind. I am sorry for being so rude.

 

[Nomad2054]

Only a Somaale Male can cause so much devastation

I may not love again

you know in this life all things come in pairs, pleasure accompanies pain like day accompanies night.

its part of the game, yet we fail to read the small print in the contract.

you have to be there for you now by focusing on your strengths and what your good at.

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ps thanks for sharing your situation its very brave of you.

 

[Zach]

emptiness is not an emotion but a state
it’s a state of numbness and sadness
A drowning of the soul
He went away and left me broken
Will my heart mend? It might do
But I may never love again

Just on a lyrical point of view it’s bad, without diminishing the emotion you put in .

 

[government]

Just on a lyrical point of view it’s bad, without diminishing the emotion you put in .

Not all poems are about rhymes what are you 12

 

[Zach]

Not all poems are about rhymes what are you 12

NIgga, i said on a lyrical view, not rhyme. Stupid as .

 

[Kudhufo Kadhaqaq]

NIgga, i said on a lyrical view, not rhyme. Stupid as .

Why are u always so angry? chill out sxb.

 

[Zach]

Why are u always so angry? chill out sxb.

I can’t stand people that think they’re smart when they’re not. I’m not angry tho

 

[Kudhufo Kadhaqaq]

I can’t stand people that think they’re smart when they’re not. I’m not angry tho

He didn't claim to be smart tho

 

[Zach]

He didn't claim to be smart tho

Bruh, i said to Knowles that her poem was not good on lyrical level. Than he quoted me and said "Not all poems are about rhymes what are you 12" not knowing what lyrical analysis and makinghim a wannabe smart ass