My book will be available on Amazon on december

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I think your story telling style is too raw, and too Somalis. You bring your horniness to the table. U r supposed to be detached.
That was one of the most tense moments in the book

But it has all the dates, the movie times and family meeting as well
 

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LOVE is a product of Doqoniimo mixed with lust
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That was one of the most tense moments in the book

But it has all the dates, the movie times and family meeting as well


Judging from your writing alone, i can surmise you never made love to a woman.
 

Basra

LOVE is a product of Doqoniimo mixed with lust
Let Them Eat Cake
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Poor you ilahow naag an waxba ogeyn ha cadabin


No. Am serious. I analyzed every word of your sex scene. The give away was 'before she too control' I have a sense that u r a feminine man. but i might be wrong of course. Or maybe u r girl name Sagal.
 
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