I WROTE A SHORT STORY (vvvvv serious) (emotional) (try not to cry)

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  1. epiphany

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    He looked at him, his eyes slowly skimming him. He thought he was perfect from head to toe. He was mesmerized. His wittiness, his humour, his yellow spotty face, and his square body.

    "Spongebob," moaned Barney the dinosaur. Barney tried to loosen SpongeBob's grip on him, but SpongeBob held on, his face inching closer to Barney's face. Barney stayed still and let the yellow sponge kiss him.

    Their lips molded together and their breath mingled. Barney felt butterflies in his stomach and his heart rate increased. Barney couldn't breathe and he started lightly tapping SpongeBob's butt to get his attention, but Spongebob kissed him harder, his grip on barney's wrist tightening. Spongebob enjoyed making him squirm. He adored how cute Barney was.

    Suddenly, Barney stopped breathing and went limp. Spongebob panicked. Did he unknowingly kill Barney??? He laid Barney on the floor and checked his pulse. His pulse wasn't working! The poor Spong was scared shitless. He killed his only love. How unlucky he was. Spongebob slumped onto the ground and sobbed silently.

    He wept for the life he killed. He wept for the pain and misery his love went through. Then, like a ton of bricks, Spongebob realized that he could get arrested for this. He quickly gave Barney a kiss on the forehead and left without looking back.

    Spongebob promised to never love again. His deadly kiss had caused the death of his precious boyfriend. He had no one to blame but himself.

    Spongebob hated himself.

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  2. Medulla

    Medulla The Anti-Qabyaalad Emperor VIP

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    This is weirder than that Spongebob porn parody WSHH uploaded that one time good job
     
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  3. epiphany

    epiphany / Proud android / Android lives matter! /

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    I thought this was normal I don't understand???? Don't people write smut fanfics about Spongebob in their free time?
     
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    epiphany / Proud android / Android lives matter! /

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    I am not a negro. I am a WHITE Somali.
     
  5. Medulla

    Medulla The Anti-Qabyaalad Emperor VIP

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    No normally we just to make smut fanfics on Beyblade or teletubies you know normal shows? Spongebob is for lefties
     
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  7. Céleste

    Céleste Aabo Siyaadist

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    ahahahah reminded me of wattpad fanfics
     
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  8. epiphany

    epiphany / Proud android / Android lives matter! /

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    Disgusting. Absolutely DISGUSTING. Wattpad scared me and I would be crazy to copy that stupid app. I am much more creative and superior. Put some respect on my name.
     
  9. Daacad90

    Daacad90 Aspiring Buraanbur Artist.

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    SuperB writing:2tjlv3e::nvjpqts:
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  10. The_Kong Dong

    The_Kong Dong Somalia First!

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    I only have one problem with the story. The roles need to be reversed, Sponge bob is 4 inches tall but Barney is over 6 foot. The story is like a mouse raping a horse, basically impossible. Nobody is raping Barney, That nikka big
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    Otherwise i loved the story, You have some serious talent sxb. 10/10 Perfect:samwelcome:
     
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  11. epiphany

    epiphany / Proud android / Android lives matter! /

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    I didn't think of that. Thank you so much for the feedback :it0tdo8:
     
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    Can you make more stories.
    Your threads from now on are story threads only.
     
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  13. The Good

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    What did I just read
    :gucciwhat::dead:
     
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