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Now we have sisters composing poetry. What's next? They will start kissing in public and engrave their cadaan boyfriend's name into trees. Naayadha ma naga xishootiin?
 

GodKnowsBest

Somaliweyn Unionist
Some serious talent there. Hopefully you didn't plagiarize from somewhere else.
You can look it up to see if it's plagiarized.

Have no need to plagiarize when it's all in my head and comes to my fingertips in bouts of emotion.

Also this is a Somali forum, why would I plagiarize to look good in front of people I will never meet??
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Thanks for the compliment though. :dabcasar:
 

GodKnowsBest

Somaliweyn Unionist
These gabays were written in a bout of sadness. I cried before and while writing the first one and a tear drop rolled down my cheeks as I wrote the second.

I hope for this thread to become one where I can share poems and I hope we can eventually create a subsection for poetry on SSPOT. SSPOT is filled with young bright Somali minds and poetry is a deep entrenched part of our history that cannot end with the civil war.

For the time being I won't disclose the meanings behind the poems (though one of you already understands the meaning behind at least the first). Each poem has several themes weeded throughout some easier to pick up than others. The first poem in particular has phrases that mirror events that happened in my life.

I gave the thread an obscure title and a non-active part of the forums so it wouldn't gain much attention. Feel free to add in your own insight, your own poems if you do wish.

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Gibiin-Udug

Crowned Queen of Puntland. Supporter of PuntExit
Sitting here,
Thinking, thinking, heart beating fast,
Thinking about all the Ashy Abdis lying to innocent xalimos,
Thinking about all the good times I told Ashy Abdis to screw off,
I look in the mirror and see the greatest person looking back,
Smile? What is smile?
Nah I just giggle,
Love? What is love? Don't hurt me no more?
Qabiil? Qabiliste? Qoob qaac,
Coffee? My IV that I need to get by,



Please don't steal my poem.
I hope I inspired you all.
 
Sitting here,
Thinking, thinking, heart beating fast,
Thinking about all the Ashy Abdis lying to innocent xalimos,
Thinking about all the good times I told Ashy Abdis to screw off,
I look in the mirror and see the greatest person looking back,
Smile? What is smile?
Nah I just giggle,
Love? What is love? Don't hurt me no more?
Qabiil? Qabiliste? Qoob qaac,
Coffee? My IV that I need to get by,



Please don't steal my poem.
I hope I inspired you all.
That was so beautiful
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GodKnowsBest

Somaliweyn Unionist
Sitting here,
Thinking, thinking, heart beating fast,
Thinking about all the Ashy Abdis lying to innocent xalimos,
Thinking about all the good times I told Ashy Abdis to screw off,
I look in the mirror and see the greatest person looking back,
Smile? What is smile?
Nah I just giggle,
Love? What is love? Don't hurt me no more?
Qabiil? Qabiliste? Qoob qaac,
Coffee? My IV that I need to get by,



Please don't steal my poem.
I hope I inspired you all.
Beautiful poem it has inspired me!!

Using Rock like a loser getting by,
Ciroc or Henny, don't make me die,
Saying you're working on your iman-nice try,
I see right through your damn petty lies.

Niggas dropping to have the opportunities in your life,
Like a ****** you've never had real strife,
A cockroach like you ain't worth my time,
I see right through your damn petty lies

Faraxs- they real ballas- but truth said,
You have no 'balls' between yo legs.


I'm done hearing your empty chests painful cries,
I see right through your damn petty lies
 
Little Farah:

He weeps in the mirror And consoles himself With hate

Oh the dented ego of a fragile Farah,
Seeking out love but finding only
Hate

He spends all day behind a screen
Typing out his endless hatred like
A stream

Oh the mindless fool, shall fall

Oh the mindless fool, oh the
Mindless fool

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