af somali sid lo qoro baan barana sifican baan ko halay karay lakiin qornakay ma fiino.
tips ee seee
Small corrections.
Af Soomaali sida loo qoro baan barana si fiican. Waan ku hadlikara laakin qoraalkayga ma fiicna
Remember somali is written as it sounds. In the title you said ko hatlay but if you listen to yourself speaking you'll say "ku hadlay".
Tips i sii (this is "give me tips" if you are asking one person. If you are asking many you'd say Tips i siiya. ) In Somali there's a difference with You singular and You plural and you have to conjugate accordingly
Remember if you are an English speaker the sounds like the double OO in the world Book are written with a U and not with an o or double oo like you would in English. So it's KU and not Ko or Koo.
Same with the letter I. In English you write it EE like in the word Bee but in Somali it's just an I. So it's i sii and not ee see.
The double EE sounds exists in Somali but it's pronounced like in the E in the word Empty but more stretched because it's a long vowel.
Overall you are doing good, keep up with the good work