Please read my ideas for my characters in my manga

The story is revolves around this special Dhaqan Celis that’s an extreme spiritual/physical boot camp for gaalos/outcasts of their qabil to reform to become saints. The leader are Fadumo ( the daughter of Buuti).
Besides the main character Niles, there two of my rough drafts of some of the other main team. It’s a team of six in the dhaqan celis. ( 4 guys and 2 girls ) Each is from a different qabil. Here’s the first of the five of main characters.
A young darood boy( between12-14) from a fictional aristocratic clan descended from the Majeerteen clan that becomes a pirate to fight against his family’s corrupt business practices. Once his family were noble successful businessman and holy men, they sold out. Now they’re taking bribes from ajnabis’ to dump toxic on Somalia’s soil. Character class: Archer/Thief/Orator . His weapon is a super soaker Ak47/bayonet model with shoots high pressure water bullets. His personality is like Jack Sparrow, except he uses his childish looks to con people, instead of being flaky/weird. Despite being a kid, he’s very professional about his piracy. Something like Jordan Belford from Wolf of Wall Street and a little of Patrick Bateman from American Psycho. He has business cards and refers to his work as an entrepreneur of exotic fishing and waste management.
 
The other is a Kenyan-Somali cop from the Rahanweyn qabil. He’s an ex famous footballer . Descended from shepherds and use his sheep like a police dog. Fights using taekwondo with his football skills. The sheep become steel wool cotton balls that he can kick like a soccer ball. His special sentai police suit conducts static, so the cottons balls stick to him, so he can control when to hit an opponent. He also rub his batons against his sheep to turn them into tasers. His personality is very hard on justice, but is a bro about. Imagine Shaq being a Kenyan cop with a touch of Judge Dedd while still acting like Shaq. He’s friendly like Shaq, marketable like Michael Jordan with Sentai Robo Cop...... that’s also a shepherd
 

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@Manafesto I got a character that’s a hood Somali from Cedar Riverside in Minneapolis that fight style is a mixture of Somali martial art Lagdin, a Jiu-Jitsu like form of wrestling and Mexican Lucha Libre. His wrestler persona is called El Halcon de Onix. It’s translated into The Onyx Hawk in Spanish . He’s also a second generation Somali and from the Dir qabil.
 
You seem to have a unique perception of us. Your overall posts got the recurrent theme of individualistic, anarchic characterizations of Somalis. Does it inspire your attitude in political ideology, or do you interpret things to reinforce personal dissent-like affinity?
 
Add lgbtq+ Samuel Jackson
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Wait thats you?
👍 Look at my wide Bantu nose.
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Purple lips, reddish skin and oval flat faces are super common pure Bantus. bLaCK pEOpLe ComE aLl cOLoRs, SHaPes, aND sIzEs.............BUUUUT if you prefer lighter skin, small pointy noses, delicate features, long curly/wavy/straight hair of ANY color that’s not jet black, then you’re a self-hating colorism coon that promotes white/European/exotic beauty standards
 
With the Lagdin Lucha Libre one, he’s going speak Portuguese, instead of Spanish. Lol 😂 His wrestler name is O Onix Diabo Falcao or Diabo Falcao for short. Translates to The Onix Devil Hawk or Devil Hawk.
 
👍 Look at my wide Bantu nose. View attachment 160089View attachment 160090View attachment 160091
Purple lips, reddish skin and oval flat faces are super common pure Bantus. bLaCK pEOpLe ComE aLl cOLoRs, SHaPes, aND sIzEs.............BUUUUT if you prefer lighter skin, small pointy noses, delicate features, long curly/wavy/straight hair of ANY color that’s not jet black, then you’re a self-hating colorism coon that promotes white/European/exotic beauty standards
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Great Story Cuzzo and I think it will be interesting and refreshing and worth your time.

I suck at writings anything longer than 2 pages but I don't mind throwing few odd thoughts on your way, also you should add my pirate cousin as the boss of your lead actor and make create a multi plot story.:ufdup:


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No daroods especially the ones in bari were always known to be pirates
I was watching this documentary about piracy in Somalia and they said the hub of piracy in Somalia is Puntland
I was shocked actually I didn’t know it was daroodis I thought it was some qaxoonti that are a mix of isaaq and Hawiye and daroods and other langaaabs lakeen I was surprised when they fully pinned it in Puntland
 
No daroods especially the ones in bari were always known to be pirates
I was watching this documentary about piracy in Somalia and they said the hub of piracy in Somalia is Puntland
I was shocked actually I didn’t know it was daroodis I thought it was some qaxoonti that are a mix of isaaq and Hawiye and daroods and other langaaabs lakeen I was surprised when they fully pinned it in Puntland

I guess you came out of the qabil closet. I knew you'd fess up eventually. :chrisfreshhah:
 

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