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You aren't an entrepreneur if you need quotes to get you out of bed.

Here's a satire I'm testing on cringy quotes and doing a Somali voice over on them.

Let me know you what you Non-Merchants think.

This is when the Somali language shines:chrisfreshhah:


 

Grigori Rasputin

Former Somali Minister of Mismanagement & Misinfo.
Staff Member
Wariyaha SomaliSpot
@DuchessNinkiiUuriyey What do you think of this?

Im not one to kill a man's inspiration and ambitions but sxb maxaad saaka ku quweysatey? Geedihiina ma ku dartey?

@LarryThePuntite i laughted a little sxb , you good bro, keep doing your thang!

Can you do me a favor bro, Can you make a parody of me on a setting like this. Come on bro! Btw, remember to call me "uncleMenace"
 
Im not one to kill a man's inspiration and ambitions but sxb maxaad saaka ku quweysatey? Geedihiina ma ku dartey?

@LarryThePuntite i laughted a little sxb , you good bro, keep doing your thang!

Can you do me a favor bro, Can you make a parody of me on a setting like this. Come on bro! Btw, remember to call me "uncleMenace"

I just hate Quote cards. You will understand when you start a business. I absolutely hate them
 

Abdalla

Medical specialist in diagnosing Majeerteentitis
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Typical Somali trying to be an expert in everything. Sxb, you're an entrepreneur, not a comedian or a clown. My advise is stick to what you're good in. I do like your IG and the quotes you have like only a nacas looks forward to the weekend. My feedback is ditch the voiceover.

Don't attach the quality of your work by how many views you have. That will come with time.
 
Typical Somali trying to be an expert in everything. Sxb, you're an entrepreneur, not a comedian or a clown. My advise is stick to what you're good in. I do like your IG and the quotes you have like only a nacas looks forward to the weekend. My feedback is ditch the voiceover.

Don't attach the quality of your work by how many views you have. That will come with time.

Thanks for the feedback.

Do you understand how the underlying truth around quotes from an entrepreneur perspective.

I'm not an expert @ everything I share 3 core pillars:
Business, Buying stocks and owning homes. Those are 3 things essential to developing your wealth.

These quotes are a satire to increase sharing and develop an understanding around what Quote cards mean.

Or let me guess, you are just cheesed you don't speak or understand Af-Somali.
 
You aren't an entrepreneur if you need quotes to get you out of bed.

Here's a satire I'm testing on cringy quotes and doing a Somali voice over on them.

Let me know you what you Non-Merchants think.

This is when the Somali language shines:chrisfreshhah:



What happened to the podcast? I think a podcast is better than IG in my opinion.

- Yahya The Jubatite
 

Abdalla

Medical specialist in diagnosing Majeerteentitis
Prof.Dr.Eng.
VIP
Thanks for the feedback.

Do you understand how the underlying truth around quotes from an entrepreneur perspective.

I'm not an expert @ everything I share 3 core pillars:
Business, Buying stocks and owning homes. Those are 3 things essential to developing your wealth.

These quotes are a satire to increase sharing and develop an understanding around what Quote cards mean.

Or let me guess, you are just cheesed you don't speak or understand Af-Somali.

The quotes are good, it suits your topic. I was talking about the voiceover, that doesn't suit your area of expertise, the quotes in question do. So keep the satire quotes, give them a somali twist like with the 'only a nacas looks forward to weekends' quote. The voiceover is a no no, it would even put your credibility in question.

As for your little shade at the end, I think I can speak better Somali than you. I can definitely write better Somali than you: it's 'rageedi' not 'rageethi' like you always write :yacadiim:
 

Grigori Rasputin

Former Somali Minister of Mismanagement & Misinfo.
Staff Member
Wariyaha SomaliSpot
Typical Somali trying to be an expert in everything. Sxb, you're an entrepreneur, not a comedian or a clown. My advise is stick to what you're good in. I do like your IG and the quotes you have like only a nacas looks forward to the weekend. My feedback is ditch the voiceover.

Don't attach the quality of your work by how many views you have. That will come with time.

He appeared on that irreverent Sheeko Sheeko vlog show and they laughed for him while they were all under the influence of Kush that our skinny brother here took it to the bank that he is a budding comedian only to get that check bounce
 
He appeared on that irreverent Sheeko Sheeko vlog show and they laughed for him while they were all under the influence of Kush that our skinny brother here took it to the bank that he is a budding comedian only to get that check bounce

I'm not a comedian I'm a creative. Big difference.

If you don't own a business you won't understand why these Quote cards are so annoying. I just did for the fan base and noticed it's absolutely cringy for me to post quotes.
 
The quotes are good, it suits your topic. I was talking about the voiceover, that doesn't suit your area of expertise, the quotes in question do. So keep the satire quotes, give them a somali twist like with the 'only a nacas looks forward to weekends' quote. The voiceover is a no no, it would even put your credibility in question.

As for your little shade at the end, I think I can speak better Somali than you. I can definitely write better Somali than you: it's 'rageedi' not 'rageethi' like you always write :yacadiim:

Shade is competitive.

I don't use spell check.

These voice over Quote cards sink in if you are business oriented. I'm not a comedian I'm me. Giving a perspective on these quotes can increase attention on what it truly means to be motivated.

I run an ecommerce store now after closing down a B2B business in Alberta. As I share the behind the scenes content of my day-to-day dhibaato, I just want to steer young Somali would-be-entrepreneurs from getting duped.

Trust me when I say "Nobody cares about Somali Business Content, because it requires people watching successful Somalis".
 
@Abdalla

When you say "Expert at everything".

What do you mean by that? Because I have this very issue when deploying and sharing things I'm currently doing like:

•Buying an investment property abroad
•Keeping an eye on my Stocks
•Running a Shopify store that I purchased from someone instead of this lunacy in Alibaba dropshipping promises.

If I'm outside of those 3 areas than I'm not credible.
 
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