Hodan Naleya: Hodaneya....A Poem....

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A poem dedicated to Hodan Naleya of Intergrated TV

Hodaneya!


She walks in beauty, like the night
Of cloudless climes, and starry skies;
And all that’s best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect, and her eyes;
And in her voice unites All that is apart,
All that are away, as if, Never from home depart,
And in Her Heart conquers the unconquerable,
And when she travels to Somalia,
Never is she more adorable,
Never is she more loved.
Guulooo Hodaneya, Naleya! !!!!
 
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Besides u guys are supposed to critique and discuss the brilliance of the prose. Not the juicy str8 to gossip lynching lol


To help with the discussion i plagiarized Lord Byron's poem first top lines/stanzas...


She Walks in Beauty
BY LORD BYRON (GEORGE GORDON)
She walks in beauty, like the night
Of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that’s best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes;

Thus mellowed to that tender light
Which heaven to gaudy day denies.

One shade the more, one ray the less,
Had half impaired the nameless grace
Which waves in every raven tress,
Or softly lightens o’er her face;
Where thoughts serenely sweet express,
How pure, how dear their dwelling-place.

And on that cheek, and o’er that brow,
So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,
The smiles that win, the tints that glow,
But tell of days in goodness spent,
A mind at peace with all below,
A heart whose love is innocent!
 
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