Am I Not God's Imperfect Creation?????? Poem By Basra

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Basra

LOVE is a product of Doqoniimo mixed with lust
Let Them Eat Cake
VIP
AM I NOT GOD'S IMPERFECT CREATION????????????????????????????????????????
I ask thee, my fellow human creation?
Am I worthy to be spared of ALL your eyes,
Your belittling sneering, Your generous comments,,
Your Judgements, and Your shrugging, rolling eyes,
Is it not enough that I am a Pacifist?
Glory in my battle with YOU keyboard Jihadist?
Even though I am a sinner?
Even though I am vain, drained of quite, good morals?
AM I not decent, smiling, kind, abiding to my disposition,
Residing within the limits of my nature.
My ultimate, rude awakening downfall.
I am not PERFECT. I am just HUMAN.
Can you hear me dear MAN?
I may be vain, shallow, empty, sad or inappropriate.
Still, I deserve your kindness. I deserve R.E. S.P.E.C.T!!!
My unkind thoughts in my head they mumble & rumble,
Worrying, and thinking of what you think of me,
Saddened by strangers empty unshared opinions,
Can you hear me?
ALL YOU, mankind, womankind, ALL Somali- kinds,
I may be vile inside, and immaculately pretty outside,
But still, I appeal to your better nature,
END IT NOW. I NEED CLOSURE.
AM I not redeemable & ONLY answerable to my God?
My ONE lord, & my SUPREME maker?
Please.!! I stand before you, naked & approachable.
Composed, and reposed; in ALL my imperfections,
Vulnerable, prostrating, & appealing to my Creator,
AM I NOT GOD'S IMPERFECT CREATION?
Worthy to be forgiven, loved, loving, even Triumphant?
Is it too much to ask: leave ALL snarky pontifications to my maker?
The rightful owner of my faithful slavery?
The inspirer through mercy of my bravery?
Have I changed your mind, if but little
When ALL my defeats & Failures are sparkling brittle,
But still, I ask thee, to leave me be, & let me be,
In the grace of my maker,
For truth be …...
AM I NOT GODS IMPERFECT CREATION???????????????????????????????????????
 
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Muji

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mrlog

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AM I NOT GOD'S IMPERFECT CREATION????????????????????????????????????????
I ask thee, my fellow human creation?
Am I worthy to be spared of ALL your eyes,
Your belittling sneering, Your generous comments,,
Your Judgements, and Your shrugging, rolling eyes,
Is it not enough that I am a Pacifist?
Glory in my battle with YOU keyboard Jihadist?
Even though I am a sinner?
Even though I am vain, drained of quite, good morals?
AM I not decent, smiling, kind, abiding to my disposition,
Residing within the limits of my nature.
My ultimate, rude awakening downfall.
I am not PERFECT. I am just HUMAN.
Can you hear me dear MAN?
I may be vain, shallow, empty, sad or inappropriate.
Still, I deserve your kindness. I deserve R.E. S.P.E.C.T!!!
My unkind thoughts in my head they mumble & rumble,
Worrying, and thinking of what you think of me,
Saddened by strangers empty unshared opinions,
Can you hear me?
ALL YOU, mankind, womankind, ALL Somali- kinds,
I may be vile inside, and immaculately pretty outside,
But still, I appeal to your better nature,
END IT NOW. I NEED CLOSURE.
AM I not redeemable & ONLY answerable to my God?
My ONE lord, & my SUPREME maker?
Please.!! I stand before you, naked & approachable.
Composed, and reposed; in ALL my imperfections,
Vulnerable, prostrating, & appealing to my Creator,
AM I NOT GOD'S IMPERFECT CREATION?
Worthy to be forgiven, loved, loving, even Triumphant?
Is it too much to ask: leave ALL snarky pontifications to my maker?
The rightful owner of my faithful slavery?
The inspirer through mercy of my bravery?
Have I changed your mind, if but little
When ALL my defeats & Failures are sparkling brittle,
But still, I ask thee, to leave me be, & let me be,
In the grace of my maker,
For truth be …...
AM I NOT GODS IMPERFECT CREATION???????????????????????????????????????

God iyo imperfection kala fogeey.
He made u perfect but have u free will.
Don’t conflate Allah with the tri-un Christian god
 
AM I NOT GOD'S IMPERFECT CREATION????????????????????????????????????????
I ask thee, my fellow human creation?
Am I worthy to be spared of ALL your eyes,
Your belittling sneering, Your generous comments,,
Your Judgements, and Your shrugging, rolling eyes,
Is it not enough that I am a Pacifist?
Glory in my battle with YOU keyboard Jihadist?
Even though I am a sinner?
Even though I am vain, drained of quite, good morals?
AM I not decent, smiling, kind, abiding to my disposition,
Residing within the limits of my nature.
My ultimate, rude awakening downfall.
I am not PERFECT. I am just HUMAN.
Can you hear me dear MAN?
I may be vain, shallow, empty, sad or inappropriate.
Still, I deserve your kindness. I deserve R.E. S.P.E.C.T!!!
My unkind thoughts in my head they mumble & rumble,
Worrying, and thinking of what you think of me,
Saddened by strangers empty unshared opinions,
Can you hear me?
ALL YOU, mankind, womankind, ALL Somali- kinds,
I may be vile inside, and immaculately pretty outside,
But still, I appeal to your better nature,
END IT NOW. I NEED CLOSURE.
AM I not redeemable & ONLY answerable to my God?
My ONE lord, & my SUPREME maker?
Please.!! I stand before you, naked & approachable.
Composed, and reposed; in ALL my imperfections,
Vulnerable, prostrating, & appealing to my Creator,
AM I NOT GOD'S IMPERFECT CREATION?
Worthy to be forgiven, loved, loving, even Triumphant?
Is it too much to ask: leave ALL snarky pontifications to my maker?
The rightful owner of my faithful slavery?
The inspirer through mercy of my bravery?
Have I changed your mind, if but little
When ALL my defeats & Failures are sparkling brittle,
But still, I ask thee, to leave me be, & let me be,
In the grace of my maker,
For truth be …...
AM I NOT GODS IMPERFECT CREATION???????????????????????????????????????
Lemme call up hadrawi sort out your Somali and we got a new millionaire poet on our hands
 

White

Sippin tea in yo hood. PS IM A DUDE
AM I NOT GOD'S IMPERFECT CREATION????????????????????????????????????????
I ask thee, my fellow human creation?
Am I worthy to be spared of ALL your eyes,
Your belittling sneering, Your generous comments,,
Your Judgements, and Your shrugging, rolling eyes,
Is it not enough that I am a Pacifist?
Glory in my battle with YOU keyboard Jihadist?
Even though I am a sinner?
Even though I am vain, drained of quite, good morals?
AM I not decent, smiling, kind, abiding to my disposition,
Residing within the limits of my nature.
My ultimate, rude awakening downfall.
I am not PERFECT. I am just HUMAN.
Can you hear me dear MAN?
I may be vain, shallow, empty, sad or inappropriate.
Still, I deserve your kindness. I deserve R.E. S.P.E.C.T!!!
My unkind thoughts in my head they mumble & rumble,
Worrying, and thinking of what you think of me,
Saddened by strangers empty unshared opinions,
Can you hear me?
ALL YOU, mankind, womankind, ALL Somali- kinds,
I may be vile inside, and immaculately pretty outside,
But still, I appeal to your better nature,
END IT NOW. I NEED CLOSURE.
AM I not redeemable & ONLY answerable to my God?
My ONE lord, & my SUPREME maker?
Please.!! I stand before you, naked & approachable.
Composed, and reposed; in ALL my imperfections,
Vulnerable, prostrating, & appealing to my Creator,
AM I NOT GOD'S IMPERFECT CREATION?
Worthy to be forgiven, loved, loving, even Triumphant?
Is it too much to ask: leave ALL snarky pontifications to my maker?
The rightful owner of my faithful slavery?
The inspirer through mercy of my bravery?
Have I changed your mind, if but little
When ALL my defeats & Failures are sparkling brittle,
But still, I ask thee, to leave me be, & let me be,
In the grace of my maker,
For truth be …...
AM I NOT GODS IMPERFECT CREATION???????????????????????????????????????
Oh shit it's really good, keep it up!
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Nomad2054

There is nothing permanent except change.
as imperfect you are
i accepted you as a star
i sought your shine from a far
your mind amazed me mama

you're too gone to be saved
perhaps too old to relate
you're so victorian age
you have historians dazed

perhaps glory awaits
your wise wiz of a lake
might find a way out this maze
and if life was a book
you would be confined to this page

life of man is a struggle
the pain demands we be humble
as we rise, amid ashes and rubble
shaken, but taking to tasks so subtle
this is me in agreement
so it aint a rebuttal
 

Basra

LOVE is a product of Doqoniimo mixed with lust
Let Them Eat Cake
VIP
God iyo imperfection kala fogeey.
He made u perfect but have u free will.
Don’t conflate Allah with the tri-un Christian god


I disagree. Humans by definition are IMPERFECT. That's why each one of us is weird in their own way. ONLY GOD PERFECT :)
 

Basra

LOVE is a product of Doqoniimo mixed with lust
Let Them Eat Cake
VIP
as imperfect you are
i accepted you as a star
i sought your shine from a far
your mind amazed me mama

you're too gone to be saved
perhaps too old to relate
you're so victorian age
you have historians dazed

perhaps glory awaits
your wise wiz of a lake
might find a way out this maze
and if life was a book
you would be confined to this page

life of man is a struggle
the pain demands we be humble
as we rise, amid ashes and rubble
shaken, but taking to tasks so subtle
this is me in agreement
so it aint a rebuttal


Very Nice Nomad. I like it. It has rhythm!
 
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