A Poem :(

[Basra]

A lone tree born out of a great forest,
once upon a time-full was the nest,
with laughter's, cries, loves, and filial pest;
Never known pain or dullard rest,
Never known undesired Solitude in the family crest;
Yet today- and tomorrow- At a dark mono behest,
All is silent. Mono Laugh, Mono Cry, Mono Love. & empty pest!
Help me!
Singularly Alone. A fig in the hot scorching sad desert of the rest!

 

[Cajiib]

A lone tree born out of a great forest,
once upon a time-full was the nest,
with laughter's, cries, loves, and filial pest;
Never known pain or dullard rest,
Never known undesired Solitude in the family crest;
Yet today- and tomorrow- At a dark mono behest,
All is silent. Mono Laugh, Mono Cry, Mono Love. & empty pest!
Help me!
Singularly Alone. A fig in the hot scorching sad desert of the rest!View attachment 228202


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You’re going through something tough. May Allah ease your affairs.

 

[hamar_oo_iidil]

A lone tree born out of a great forest,
once upon a time-full was the nest,
with laughter's, cries, loves, and filial pest;
Never known pain or dullard rest,
Never known undesired Solitude in the family crest;
Yet today- and tomorrow- At a dark mono behest,
All is silent. Mono Laugh, Mono Cry, Mono Love. & empty pest!
Help me!
Singularly Alone. A fig in the hot scorching sad desert of the rest!View attachment 228202


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This is so beautiful Basra, ever considered self-publishing your poetry?

 

[Basra]

This is so beautiful Basra, ever considered self-publishing your poetry?

I don't want to publish any poems, its too personal and precious

 

[hamar_oo_iidil]

I don't want to publish any poems, its too personal and precious

Then I hope its as much satisfying to write as it is for us to read

 

[Basra]

Then I hope its as much satisfying to write as it is for us to read

Thanks sweetheart. I get a nice relief

 

[Nomadic lord]

That was pretty good.

 

[Vanessa]

Beautiful yet sad poem

 

[Taij4an]

I

A lone tree born out of a great forest,
once upon a time-full was the nest,
with laughter's, cries, loves, and filial pest;
Never known pain or dullard rest,
Never known undesired Solitude in the family crest;
Yet today- and tomorrow- At a dark mono behest,
All is silent. Mono Laugh, Mono Cry, Mono Love. & empty pest!
Help me!
Singularly Alone. A fig in the hot scorching sad desert of the rest!View attachment 228202


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I don't get it

 

[Basra]

I

I don't get it

what don't u get it huuno? Its a very simple poem lol

 

[Taij4an]

filial pest;

I dont know what this phrase means

dullard rest,

Or this

family crest;

or this

At a dark mono behest,

or this

 

[Basra]

I dont know what this phrase means

Or this

or this

or this

well google them and learn English waryaaa looool

 

[Taij4an]

well google them and learn English waryaaa looool

Reread it.
I'm guessing u have empty nest syndrome

 

[Basra]

Reread it.
I'm guessing u have empty nest syndrome

Yes. That is one good interpretation of it

 

[Taij4an]

Yes. That is one good interpretation of it

It seems like they only interpretation of it.

 

[Basra]

It seems like they only interpretation of it.

A widow missing her happy old life? A sibling missing their childhood home? etc etc

 

[Taij4an]

A widow missing her happy old life? A sibling missing their childhood home? etc etc

But in ur scenario it is empty nest syndrome

 

[Molotoff]

La ilahe ilallah
When said with the soul
It cures the sickened heart, just like it did to Ayyub (alejhi selam)


One that the Lord guides,
na siratul mustekim
The person sees like with the eyes of Yaqub (alejhi selam)
Then the day dawns for him
Just like it did for Junus (alejhi selam)

 

[Basra]

La ilahe ilallah
When said with the soul
It cures the sickened heart, just like it did to Ayyub (alejhi selam)


One that the Lord guides,
na siratul mustekim
The person sees like with the eyes of Yaqub (alejhi selam)
Then the day dawns for him
Just like it did for Junus (alejhi selam)

 

[Taij4an]

La ilahe ilallah
When said with the soul
It cures the sickened heart, just like it did to Ayyub (alejhi selam)


One that the Lord guides,
na siratul mustekim
The person sees like with the eyes of Yaqub (alejhi selam)
Then the day dawns for him
Just like it did for Junus (alejhi selam)

ngl ur poem was trash.
The content was good but the poem was trash