This is why Somali's should vote Conservative

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IftiinOfLife

Raw Hard Truth
rate it out of 10?

Honestly a Solid 2, it sounds like a 27 minute FL Studio session.

Ask yourself, what makes your music stand out, is it timeless? Is it telling your story, is it unique? Can I get the full toronto hoodrat experience from your music. I doubt you guys party in mansions with white people, show the grime lifeand the struggle, I wanna see a song about putting food on hoyos table by any means fucking necessary, I wanna see a rap song about riding TTC and getting arrested.

Get raw and gritty, but make it catchy, if you did THAT, It would make your music less generic. Tell your story through your music.

Or are you just creating music you think people will "like"? Cause that's what I'm hearing

If you brought your identity and yourself to your music, I promise it will be better.

Just my 2 cents.
 

Tukraq

VIP
Honestly a Solid 2, it sounds like a 27 minute FL Studio session.

Ask yourself, what makes your music stand out, is it timeless? Is it telling your story, is it unique? Can I get the full toronto hoodrat experience from your music. I doubt you guys party in mansions with white people, show the grime lifeand the struggle, I wanna see a song about putting food on hoyos table by any means fucking necessary, I wanna see a rap song about riding TTC and getting arrested.

Get raw and gritty, but make it catchy, if you did THAT, It would make your music less generic. Tell your story through your music.

Or are you just creating music you think people will "like"? Cause that's what I'm hearing

If you brought your identity and yourself to your music, I promise it will be better.

Just my 2 cents.
listen to capo if thats your type
 
Honestly a Solid 2, it sounds like a 27 minute FL Studio session.

Ask yourself, what makes your music stand out, is it timeless? Is it telling your story, is it unique? Can I get the full toronto hoodrat experience from your music. I doubt you guys party in mansions with white people, show the grime lifeand the struggle, I wanna see a song about putting food on hoyos table by any means fucking necessary, I wanna see a rap song about riding TTC and getting arrested.

Get raw and gritty, but make it catchy, if you did THAT, It would make your music less generic. Tell your story through your music.

Or are you just creating music you think people will "like"? Cause that's what I'm hearing

If you brought your identity and yourself to your music, I promise it will be better.

Just my 2 cents.
Thanks for the feedback, seriously! What are your thoughts on my other songs?
 

IftiinOfLife

Raw Hard Truth
Thanks for the feedback, seriously! What are your thoughts on my other songs?

I think this was your first hit, and I liked it, it was catchy, but you need to expand genres.

Can we get a top5 Ballad? A top5 wedding song?

A top 5 GRADUATION SONG?

Can we get a top5 ROCK SONG?

Try and play around with different type of songs/genres, no offence but your songs all sound the same and have the SAME PLOT, can we get different plots? Different storylines?

Try and make 1 song without using the word GUN, GANG, DRUG, BLOCK,HOOD OR N WORD.

Take the Iftiin challenge, you can do well in music if you try.
 

IftiinOfLife

Raw Hard Truth
Again this is just constructive criticism, I hope you do well in music lol. If it does work out, can I get a shout out? Just say iftiin and we cool bro.

But like I said try different types of songs, I would like to hear a top 5 love song too, if you expand on your music, it can be played more frequently and reach more listeners.

Good luck!
 

Tukraq

VIP
Again this is just constructive criticism, I hope you do well in music lol. If it does work out, can I get a shout out? Just say iftiin and we cool bro.

But like I said try different types of songs, I would like to hear a top 5 love song too, if you expand on your music, it can be played more frequently and reach more listeners.

Good luck!
So what’s your critique on chino?
 
Again this is just constructive criticism, I hope you do well in music lol. If it does work out, can I get a shout out? Just say iftiin and we cool bro.

But like I said try different types of songs, I would like to hear a top 5 love song too, if you expand on your music, it can be played more frequently and reach more listeners.

Good luck!

Come on my ig live today, I'm broadcasting today
 
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